The paper is pretty good but the force field analysis should talk about available resources/strengths of the community too and then state whether the strengths are more or the drawbacks. This paper did not talk about resources/strengths of the community. Otherwise it is up to the level I expected. I would appreciate if these changes can be made. Thank you for the help.

Needed a little work but overall good paper.

Very indepth

very good work

Thanks correct first time

Perfect, thanks

Thank you for the updated and timely essay. This one is much better although this writer uses hyperboles and comes across as overly emotional and subjective.

Outstanding and Received an A

good and prompt revision

Great write up and ahead of time.