I had to go back in and make a ton of corrections on the paper. For example, in part of the paper, the writer put the student was the only boy. The writer a few line later referenced a brother. Multiple things like that I had to correct

The writer was very helpful as he ammended the whole assessment in time

Great paper, thanks!

Great experience!

Great work, very happy

I received a 72/100 on this paper...comments from my teacher below... You had a good start with this paper, but it needed a lot more work. It was not clear that you really understood the legal issues here. This paper was not organized well. You had very large sections of this paper that were not cited correctly. This was posted throughout the classroom: all paraphrased sentences and direct quotes need to be cited. Be sure to argue a point in future papers and be sure to cite accordingly.

Mission accomplished!

thank you

Good work. Thanks

Nice job. Thank you